I'll cry for you... but don't cry for me,
Let's take a walk...
but only by the sea,
I'll be there for you...
but don't be there for me,
I'll rely on you...
and you can rely on me,
That's because i trust you...
and i wish you'll understand,
That if you weren't here for me...
my life get's out of hand.
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27 comments:
hey dr.butterfly
ohhhhhhhh great, do u know that i love poems so much either in Arabic or English, and sometimes i do write poetry too,
but don't think they r as nice as yours,
keep writing, good luck
hey there dr.butterfly n sarora,
wow,interesting enough to know both of you like poetry,hehe,keep up the good work=)
Hello....Honstly speaking, It is nice..
I like it..
Keep it up
Regards
Oh daida how i enjoyed 'e ur words ... Simply put pic 2 d sea infront of me then wll be poetry simply ... I took zilions of pic 2 d sea & never bored from watching them .. Salam
thank you so much everyone for stoping by and reading my poems!!
sarora: it's nice to see you love poetry too, and i'm sure they are great! they could even be better than mine!
wanie: i'm really glad you liked them!!.. thank u!
libyan bebo: thank you for your kindness, i'm happy you liked it!
abdullah sh: i'm glad you liked my words! trully!.. i love the sea and i'll never get bord of writing about it... i have many poems about the sea and photos too.
once again thank you all for your comments. i'm thinking of publishing my poems, but i thought i'd see the feedback first via bloggin them! so plz, don't hesitate to be honist in critisizing anything!... and i'll keep posting them.. ;)
take care all!!!
daida...poetry 2 ...really6 nice words i loved them alot keep on
thank you weda, i'm glad you liked them!
very nice and sweet but can i ask a question?.. i'll ask it any way
why
I'll be there for you...
but don't be there for me,?
i didn't understand those lines
best wishes
thank you salma for your comment!!
hat specific line, is a way of saying. i'll be there when ever you need me, at no price, you don't have to be there in return, that i'm just doing it out of kindness!!!
i hope you got what i mean!?
don't hesitate to ask or say if something wasn't nice or could be said in a better way!!
take care!!
oh i understand what you meant but those lines gave me the impression that i'll be their for you taking care of you and i don't want you to be there for me ..may be it would be better if you said
I'll be there for you...
even if you weren't there for me,?
I'm very sorry i feel pushy but you asked us to share our criticism
salam
:)
كل عام وانت طيب بالصحة والسلامه
رمضانك مبروك
It is first time to read poems in english,I sometimes listen to Libyan poems, it is so interesting and it included fantastic images about Libyan society for courage,love,martyring and faithfullness etc...but really this poems is some words do not included any images ...
Best regardS
it's ok salma, ur comment is appreaciated here!!
i know what you mean, it would be more clear if i wrote it the way you suggested... but poetry sometimes doesn't have to be very clear to and straight to the point, plus i felt the sentence that i used was light enough for the whole poem. i'm glad you liked it and i'm very glad ur critisized it...trully thank you!!
thank you motherland for stopping by!! trully appreaciated!!!
i'm sorry, i didn't get wat you ment by .."(this poems is some words do not included any images ... )"
do u mean that, i didn't need to add an image to the poem?!? ... i feel like i have to, just to add life to my blog, but u can read it without looking at the image to imagine your own.. :)
i like libyan poetry as well, it is very deep and give you the meaning to your own life, strong!!
salam!!... and take care all, thank you!
u 'r soooooooo great writer
u have avery sweet feeling really i enjoyed
take care have a nice Ramadan times
Asalam Alykum
nice words dr.butterfly i think you are really talented & emotional girl, so keep going.
Ramadan Mubarak
thank you nasim libya!
i'm really glad you liked 'em!!!
i'll be posting more inshaa allah, ur opinion is impotant , keep reading.
thank you, dear!!
salam!
thank you صاحب الضل الطويل..!
your words are very kind, trully apreaciated!!...i'll continue, just keep leting me know wat you think. thnaks for stopping by!!
take care, salam!!
Such a lovely poem ... to whomever he/she is
&
كل عام و أنت بخير
فى أمان الله
wow
really i'm impressed i really appreciate it
i'm writing ENGLISH poems too but for sure they are not good as yours
go on
wish you all best my lovely poet
thank you 1/2 doc!!
i'm trully apprecited by your nice words.. thank you!
hope to see you around more often!
hi i (koki).
السلام عليكم
كلماتك بها صفاء البحر (كل سنه وانتى طيبه )تحياتى .
وتقبلى مرورى وانتى بجد نورتينى اكيد
good luck.
thank you soona!
inti ilee nawarti my blog, thank you for passing by... and please don't heasitate to come back again!
i would like to see you around more pften.. and thanks for your kind words my dear... trully appreciated!
sallam!
thank u for stopping by.... but what exactly do u mean?!! anonymouse!!
nice words .. only by the sea.. keep it up ..
hope to see you writing again butterfly ;)
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